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Nov 20th 2007, 9:02AM
Now you know it's Winter. ^_^
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This picture is very well done. Your hands and face in it are drawn very nicely. Even the hair does not look to uniform, which is good. Your anatomy is good, but your body is drawn to much at an angle and makes it look like he is slowly leaning backwards, which I don't think you were trying to do. Also though the arms are nice, though the main one we see is to straight. It looks a little to forced. And as I can see from the shoulder it seems like you were trying to go for a little more of a toned look, so the rest of the arm needs to be just a little thicker instead of becoming smaller so quickly. Also the clothes need a little more depth to them. You need to add wrinkles here and there. Don't be afraid to look up references if you need them. I find clothing very hard and always make sure to look up references for how the body makes them react. Hope this helps D: